Flat white

Your chin was warmth on my cold shoulder
The flat white sheet then tangled tight
Hot feet and blue eyes facing in
So when did those blue eyes lose smoulder
The undisturbed sheet flat and white
Your cold shoulder planted doubt
Blue eyes search and finding nothing
Leave flat white shoulders facing out

NaPoWriMo day 14 
My attempt at a san san which means “three three” in Chinese.
The san san repeats, three times, each of three terms or images. 
The seven lines rhyme in the pattern a-b-c-a-b-d-c-d.

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